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A Last Straw; Or Three ~ 55

I missed last week! How does time go so quickly that I lose whole weeks?  Anywho, the following is a flash piece that is related to the first 55 I tackled, A Tidy End.  While I hope this stands alone with no issue, it’ll reveal more when the other is read as well.  I will leave it up to the reader whether you read this first, or the other.  Again, not erotic, but eventually I’ll get there ;)  

This is, as before, part of G-Man’s 55 word flash challenge! 

A Last Straw; Or Three

Syd touched her temple.  The throbs continued, metronome, Largo Molto.  Stridence clawed through the hall.

Ted forgot to shut his door.  She listened, head cocked.  Interesting.”

2,801 days; she could wait three more.

“I’ve got an errand.”  He didn’t linger.  Syd shook her head.  An errand named Sienna.

Syd dialed a number.  ”Draw up the papers.”

 

~finis~

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3 Responses to “A Last Straw; Or Three ~ 55”

  1. G-Man July 26, 2012 at 11:57 pm #

    Aisling Weaver…
    Very intriguing story….Vague, but intriguing.
    Be that as it may…Very creative and well written.
    Loved your 55
    Thanks for playing, have a Safe trip and….
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

  2. happygirl July 27, 2012 at 12:45 pm #

    And that’s what happens with too many headaches. Sienna.

  3. shakira July 28, 2012 at 12:01 pm #

    This is really cool!
    Starting of a great novel!

    Have you a truly blessed weekend.

    hugs
    shakira

    Mine is here

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