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Precipitation ~ A DVerse Poets challenge piece

The following was written for the DVerse Poets writing challenge…

image taken by Aisling Weaver

Precipitation

*

Curtain falling

endless rain

blotting out the world

protecting this retreat.

Her lips on my skin

tingle, summer sun’s kisses

transported to my dark,

secluded bower.

*

Rumble, growl

lover and sky

pouring on my skin

pounding against windows

looking in, looking out

Wet. Warm. Hotly drenched.

*

The silent after

a caught breath

 electric frisson

taste the discharge

bright in the air

My voice is still

seven seconds away.

*

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5 Responses to “Precipitation ~ A DVerse Poets challenge piece”

  1. brian miller July 8, 2012 at 10:11 pm #

    ha i love your last line…there is a really nice sensuality going on under the surface in this as well….smiles….

    • Aisling Weaver July 9, 2012 at 9:30 am #

      Thank you, Brian! It was fun to write and try to weave the action and the weather together :)
      ~Ais

  2. Squeaky July 9, 2012 at 6:59 am #

    *catches breath* Oh, I love it!

  3. Claudia July 12, 2012 at 11:59 pm #

    very cool with the voice being still seven seconds away from the thunder…great image…

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